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Jojo's avatar

"And, if you’ve made it this far into the article, you’ll likely be amazed that a majority of people just don’t read beyond the headlines or first paragraphs before accusing me of saying something I didn’t, creating strawman arguments to knock down, and making foolish assumptions as they try to refute a concept."

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The problem is that along with that clickbait title, writers bury the answer/thing that the CB title offers somewhere down towards the end of the article. Given I read over 100 articles daily, I generally open an article, scroll down to the end and check if I see the answer in the last paragraph. It's generally there.

Now, when you are talking about more "reputable" writing, such as say, NYT articles, you can almost count on the answer/content to whatever question the title raised will be in the 5th paragraph. I suspect there is some sort of writers style guide that recommends this.

These techniques were designed to build out articles so that more advertising could be shown as the reader scrolled down. Ka-Ching!

But a decent number of people use ad blockers these days, so we don't see the ads anyway and all the supporting verbiage is a waste of precious bits. There are only so many bits in the universe! Don't waste them.

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Collette Greystone's avatar

I read the damn article. You’re starting to sound like a curmudgeon and at my age I am officially an expert. I have a pretty good example of what you’re talking about here in my recent piece “Holiday Season Tipping”, it’s the most current comment. Read it, you’ll enjoy it as I know you read what I wrote from your beautiful comment, I went back and gratefully acknowledged your comment BTW.

Sometimes we let busy get in the way of things that matter.

But given how busy I am trying to get my crew ready for a 4 month trip, that comment (not yours the other one) gave me pause. Instead of a snarky reply and I could have, I again, reassessed why I write every week. I do it because it’s fun for me. I’m not the best writer, I know that and I don’t care. I do it for me and if I get reactions, yay! I just don’t have to spend my time responding to someone who clearly spent no time reading, but spent much effort writing about what they didn’t read. Why reward it with my time and attention?

And some constructive criticism, while I’m at a different place in life and I prefer to be amused when I read, a lot of the time when I look at your stuff, the boiler plate stuff at the beginning and end get tiresome for me. Makes everything look to me like a technical manual which I did my time with in my earlier years. Maybe that’s what you’re going for? If I can scan over those and read a paragraph or two that entertain, you got me, otherwise I’m gone. I read for about 3 hours every day, at my age I go for the fun or something I don’t already know. Anyway, you have a big subscriber audience, so you definitely appeal! Thank you.

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